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5th Mar 2012, 10:52 PM
Total lockdown

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dpat57 5th Mar 2012, 10:52 PM edit delete
dpat57
This is update 2 of 2 for today, make sure you check out the previous page!
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Genejoke 5th Mar 2012, 11:24 PM edit delete reply
Genejoke
they look like dykes... kinky lesbo action coming?
dpat57 5th Mar 2012, 11:47 PM edit delete reply
dpat57
I think you may have the wrong comic, sir! X-it is that-a-way. :)
chris-tar 7th Mar 2012, 4:09 AM edit delete reply
chris-tar
I think your character development and story telling are getting better with each new comic you create. A couple suggestions though, maybe you could keep the focus on just 2-3 main characters and not spread it out amongst so many different people. Sometimes I get confused about what's going on because things change so rapidly and because there are too many different personalities competing for attention. I just want to add that I really don't see that happening too much in "MARS", but things were getting real confusing for me in Pirates Of The Black Quarter. Having said that I hope to be able to make a comic half as good as this one one day. lastly, what is the program you use to make your comics, and are all of your models original creations?
dpat57 7th Mar 2012, 8:36 AM edit delete reply
dpat57
Thanks for taking time to post, and thanks for saying so. Confusion is understandable, I've tried to keep the About page for Space Pirates up to date, hoping this helps readers deal with the larger cast list and varied locations. Maybe I'm overdue an About page for MARS, too. But yes, maybe I should just keep the stories under tighter control and cut down. :) 3D models were made using Google SketchUp, there are a couple of how-to links on my hub page, just to give a rough idea of how it's done. I'm hardly using the tip of SketchUp's full capability, but it's fun and easy to use.
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