Page 56 - Rolling.

10th Feb 2012, 2:04 PM
Rolling.

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dpat57 10th Feb 2012, 2:04 PM edit delete
dpat57
Cue the mighty throb of atomic-powered engines.
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chris-tar 10th Feb 2012, 3:41 PM edit delete reply
chris-tar
Great story, great dialogue, cool characters and environments. Suspenseful and interesting with a military flavor.
I wish I could write stories this good, but I realize I am just a beginner.
Oh, and I just added you to my subscriptions.
dpat57 10th Feb 2012, 4:20 PM edit delete reply
dpat57
Thanks for your comments, much appreciate your taking a full run at this and taking time to give feedback, super stuff!
Genejoke 11th Feb 2012, 8:29 AM edit delete reply
Genejoke
good stuff. not much to say just letting you know I'm still reading.
dpat57 11th Feb 2012, 2:18 PM edit delete reply
dpat57
Thanks! Appreciated. :)
jerrie 11th Feb 2012, 4:59 PM edit delete reply
jerrie
I second what Genejoke said! I love your comic stories!
dpat57 11th Feb 2012, 8:16 PM edit delete reply
dpat57
Thanks again for saying so, Jerrie, check's in the mail! ...Well no not really that last bit's a lie, but thanks!
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